1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-09-13 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 flea market 내 용 Today in school, their was flea market at school. It was fun. I sold many things. I also sold roasted bacon and rice-cake. I think it was very yummy. I sold one piece at \100. It is about 10 cents. I earned $ 3.6 and bougth something with $ 1. $ 1 is about equal to \ 1000. That mean $ 3.6 is almost equal to \ 3600, and quater is about \ 250. I think money's world is wonderful. I started to get poket money. It started on Semtember. Every Monday morning, I get $ 5. It is \ 5000. I have to write an entry book. If I do accounting fraud, I will be dead. And my poket money will be down, down, down, or maybe gone forever. But I'm using great. Okay, in flea market, I bougth game machine. It is just like pin-ball. I bougth Angry bird doll. I want to sell it. But, no.. Next thing I bougth is new wallet. It is because that my old angry bird wallet was ripped. So I bougth it. And it was very good. It has lots of function then ANGRY BIRD wallet. second floor wallet. Plus If you want to take out just coin, you can. Just ziiippp~~ the zipper. And that will do the all thing. I'm very proud of my self. To use a money wisely. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-09-14 답변내용 Today in school, their was flea market at school. >>Today in school, there was flea market. (choice of word / redundancy) It was fun. >>Good sentence! I sold many things. >>Good sentence! I also sold roasted bacon and rice-cake. >>Good sentence! I think it was very yummy. >>Good sentence! I sold one piece at \100.It is about 10 cents. >>What do you mean? you mean 1 pack costs 100 dollars ? I earned $ 3.6 and bougth something with $ 1. >>I earned $ 3.6 and bought something with $ 1. (spelling) $ 1 is about equal to \ 1000. >>What do you mean by this sign \ ? That mean $ 3.6 is almost equal to \ 3600, and quater is about \ 250. >>What do you mean by this sign \ ? I think money's world is wonderful. >>I think the world of money is wonderful. (word order) I started to get poket money. >>I started to get pocket money. (spelling) It started on Semtember. >>It started in September. (choice of preposition / spelling) Every Monday morning, I get $ 5. >>Good sentence! It is \ 5000. >>It is 500 won. I have to write an entry book. >>Good sentence! If I do accounting fraud, I will be dead. And my poket money will be down, down, down, or maybe gone forever. But I'm using great. >>If I do an accounting fraud, I will be dead and my pocket money will decrease or maybe gone forever ,but I'm using it wisely. (choice of word / spelling) Okay, in flea market, I bougth game machine >>In the flea market, I bought a game machine. (lack of article) It is just like pin-ball. >>It is just like a pin-ball. (lack of article) I bougth Angry bird doll. >>I bought an Angry bird doll. (lack of article / spelling) I want to sell it. But, no.. >>I want to sell it. (unnecessary words) Next thing I bougth is new wallet. >>Next thing I bought was a new wallet. (verb tense / lack of article) It is because that my old angry bird wallet was ripped. So I bougth it. >>It is because my old angry bird wallet was ripped, so I bought it. (sentence construction / spelling) And it was very good. >>It was very good. (unnecessary word) It has lots of function then ANGRY BIRD wallet. >>It has lots of functions than the ANGRY BIRD wallet. (pluralization / lack of article) second floor wallet. >>What do you mean? Plus If you want to take out just coin, you can. Just ziiippp~~ the zipper. And that will do the all thing. >>Just unzip the zipper and that will do all the things. (spelling / pluralization) I'm very proud of my self. To use a money wisely. >>I'm very proud of my self because I use money wisely. (sentence construction) Thanks for writing! Keep using money wisely!