1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-09-12 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 LEGO 내 용 Today I want to write about LEGO. Do you know lego? I like lego. Most of the kids like gun. I like gun too. But I always play with lego. First I place the lego on the bench. Then shoot him!! Thats what I did when I played with gun. Today I will collect lego people. Not changing it. just original. I will be the lego people collecter. Also I have to collect real lego. In pency store, their are lots of imitation lego. Most poplaur Lego NinJago. Imitations are Beta NinZa, NinZago. I was very surprise. Just like electric shocked. Also there are many kinds of lego. lego pirates, lego ninjago, lego city, lego cattle, lego speed racer, lego starwars, lego EXOFORCE, lego hero factory, and many other kinds. Now I will collect Original PEOPLE. In internet explorer, lego is good at our brain. And in Toy store in LOTTE Mart, quater of the store is lego. I think I have to buy some in Chrismas or my birthday. Then just colect people. Other things? I will give it to my brother. image view 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-09-13 답변내용 Today I want to write about LEGO. >>Good sentence! Do you know lego? >>Good sentence! I like lego. >>I like legos. (pluralization) Most of the kids like gun. >>Most of the kids like guns. (pluralization) I like gun too. But I always play with lego. >>I like guns too, but I always play with legos. (pluralization / sentence construction) First I place the lego on the bench. >> Good sentence! Then shoot him!! >>Then I shoot it. (lack of pronoun / choice of pronoun) Thats what I did when I played with gun. >>That's what I did when I played with a gun. (lack of apostrophe' / lack of article) Today I will collect lego people. >>Good sentence! Not changing it. just original. >>I will not change it, I will get just the original. (sentence construction) I will be the lego people collecter. >>>What do you mean? Also I have to collect real lego. >>I also have to collect real legos. (word order / pluralization) In pency store, their are lots of imitation lego. >>In pency store, there are lots of imitation legos. (choice of word / pluralization) Most poplaur Lego NinJago. >>The most popular lego is NinJago. (sentence construction) Imitations are Beta NinZa, NinZago. >>The imitations are Beta NinZa and NinZago. (sentence construction) I was very surprise. Just like electric shocked. >>I was very surprised, I felt like I had an electric shock. (sentence construction) Also there are many kinds of lego. lego pirates, lego ninjago, lego city, lego cattle, lego speed racer, lego starwars, lego EXOFORCE, lego hero factory, and many other kinds. >> Also there are many kinds of legos like lego pirates, lego ninjago, lego city, lego cattle, lego speed racer, lego starwars, lego EXOFORCE, lego hero factory and many other kinds. (pluralization) Now I will collect Original PEOPLE. >>Good sentence! In internet explorer, lego is good at our brain. >>In the internet, it is mentioned that lego us good for our brain. (choice of words) And in Toy store in LOTTE Mart, quater of the store is lego. >>In a toy store in Lotte Mart, a quarter of the store is full of legos. (intended message) I think I have to buy some in Chrismas or my birthday. >>I think I have to buy some on Chrismas or my birthday. (choice of preposition) Then just colect people. Other things? >>Then I will just collect people and other things. (sentence construction) I will give it to my brother. >>Good sentence! Thanks for the effort! I enjoyed reading your diary!