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Do you know Samsung and Apple? Their fight is just like war. Also it is known as patent war. Samsung made Gallaxy S, Gallaxy S2, Gallaxy S3, Gallaxy U, Gallaxy NOTE, Gallaxy Tab. Apple made i phone, i pod, i pad, i mac. They are electric giants. But I think Samsung will be win. Apple was won in U.S. Jury. But most of the countries are follow Samsung's opinion. Yeah, some countries are follow Apple's. But I hope Samsung will be win. I think I have to crush my father's i phone and i pod. Actually, I will not do that. Of course not. Samsung Gallaxy is more exellent then i phone. Know why? Know why? It is because that. half of the set-up is on Apple's hand. And the other half is in the user's hand. That means only half function. But gallaxy? All set-up is hand of user. So it has lot more function. Also Samsung was developed smart phones on 2006. But Apple? They developed on 2007. So I think Samsung will be win. Also I'm happy that Stephen Jobs had pass away. Stephen Jobs was the roots of the Apple tree. But if roots are gone, Apple tree will going to fall.
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Do you know Samsung and Apple? >>Good sentence! Their fight is just like war. >>Their fight is just like a war. (lack of article) Also it is known as patent war. >>It is also known as patent war. (word order) Samsung made Gallaxy S, Gallaxy S2, Gallaxy S3, Gallaxy U, Gallaxy NOTE, Gallaxy Tab. >>Samsung made Galaxy S, Galaxy S2, Galaxy S3, Galaxy U, Galaxy NOTE, and Gallaxy Tab. (spelling / lack of article) Apple made i phone, i pod, i pad, i mac. >>Apple made Iphone, Ipod, Ipad and Imac. (lack of conjunction) They are electric giants. But I think Samsung will be win. >>They are electric giants, but I think Samsung will win. (unnecessary word) Apple was won in U.S. Jury. But most of the countries are follow Samsung's opinion. >>Apple won in a U.S. court ,but most of the countries believe in Samsung. (choice of word) Yeah, some countries are follow Apple's. But I hope Samsung will be win. >>Yeah, some countries are patronizing Apple, but I hope Samsung will win. (choice of word) I think I have to crush my father's i phone and i pod. >>Good sentence! Actually, I will not do that. Of course not. >>Actually, of course I will not do that. (sentence construction) Samsung Gallaxy is more exellent then i phone. >>Samsung Galaxy is more excellent than i phone. (spelling) Know why? Know why? >>Do you know why? (sentence construction) It is because that. half of the set-up is on Apple's hand. And the other half is in the user's hand. That means only half function. But gallaxy? All set-up is hand of user. >>What do you mean? So it has lot more function. >>It has a lot of functions. (pluralization) Also Samsung was developed smart phones on 2006. But Apple? They developed on 2007. So I think Samsung will be win. >>Samsung started developing smartphones in 2006 but Apple started in 2007, so I think Also I'm happy that Stephen Jobs had pass away. >>I'm also happy that Stephen Jobs had passed away. (word order) Stephen Jobs was the roots of the Apple tree. But if roots are gone, Apple tree will going to fall. >>Stephen Jobs was the root of the Apple tree,but if roots are gone, the Apple tree will fall. (unnecessary words) Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Keep writing!