1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-09-05 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Captain Park 내 용 Every one who wants to be soccer player or Koreans will know. Park Ji-sung. Also known as captain Park. He was in Manchester United. With Roonie. But he joined at Queens Park Rangers. It is not poupler team. Then do you know the ranking of the England Premioum League. 1.chelsea- Most powerful team in England Premioum League. 2.swansea- The team that play with QPR 3.west brom 4.man city- Wow, this team is better than manchester united! 5.manchester united- In this team, Roonie, Lion Giggs are in this team 6.everten 7.west ham 8.Arsneral- My brother's uniform is also Arsneral. Park Jue-young is in this team. 9.wigun 10.New cattle 11.plum 12.stock city 13.thunderland- Jee Dong-won is in this team. 14.totnum 15.No reach- Ha Ha! what a funny name! 16.reding 17.aston villa 18.liverful 19.QPR- Captain park is in this team 20.south hamton You see QPR is 19th. But Swansea is 2nd!! It is crazy if QPR win. And more bad thing I ever heard is this. In Semtember 15th, QPR will fight with CHELSEA. Wow... Chelsea is the most powerful team on England Premioum League. I will watch this game. So good night!~~ image view 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-09-06 답변내용 Every one who wants to be soccer player or Koreans will know. Park Ji-sung. >> Also known as captain Park. >>He is also known as captain Park. (incomplete sentence! He was in Manchester United. With Roonie. But he joined at Queens Park Rangers. >>He was in Manchester United with Roonie but he joined the Queens Park Rangers. (sentence construction / choice of worda0 It is not poupler team. >>It is not a popular team. (lack of article / spelling) Then do you know the ranking of the England Premioum League. >>Do you know the ranking of teams in the English Premier League? (unnecessary word / lack of question mark / choice of word / spelling) 1.chelsea- Most powerful team in England Premioum League. Chelsea >>The most powerful team in the English Premier League. (lack of article) 2.swansea- The team that play with QPR Swansea >>This team plays with QPR. (choice of word / subject-verb agreement) 3.west brom -West Brom 4.man city- Wow, this team is better than manchester united! Man City >> Wow, this team is better than Manchester United! 5.manchester united- In this team, Roonie, Lion Giggs are in this team Manchester United >>Roonie and Lion Giggs are in this team. (Sentence construction) 6.everten - Everten 7.west ham - West Ham 8.Arsneral- My brother's uniform is also Arsneral. Park Jue-young is in this team. >>My brother's uniform is also Arsenal's uniform. Park Jue-young is in this team. 9.wigun - Wigan Athletic 10.New cattle - New Cattle 11.plum - Plum 12.stock city - Stoke City 13.thunderland- Jee Dong-won is in this team. Thunderland >> Good sentence! 14.totnum - Tottenhum 15.No reach- Ha Ha! what a funny name! Norwich >>Good sentence! 16.reding - Reading 17.aston villa - Aston Villa 18.liverful - Liverpool 19.QPR- Captain park is in this team. >>Good sentence! 20.south hamton - South Hampton You see QPR is 19th. But Swansea is 2nd!! >>You see QPR is at number 19 but Swansea is 2nd. (lack of preposition) It is crazy if QPR win. >>It is crazy if QPR wins. And more bad thing I ever heard is this. In Semtember 15th, QPR will fight with CHELSEA. >>One more bad thing I ever heard is thism, on September 15, QPR will fight with Chelsea. (unnecessary word / spelling / sentence constuction) Wow... Chelsea is the most powerful team on England Premioum League. >>Wow... Chelsea is the most powerful team in the English Premier League. (choice of word / spelling) I will watch this game. So good night!~~ >>I will watch this game, so good night!~~ (sentence construction)