1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-08-30 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Do you know map? 내 용 Students who like social study will know map. Map is very helful. It is because it help you to find a way to go. Like this story.(this is example) I'm Dao Cahill. Then my friend Ji-woo visit my house. That time, My house was exorbitant big. So if Ji-woo want to play at my room, I have to draw a map for him. It was laborious work. Because my house is 100a(this is example). Then Ji-woo expound the map and he found my room. See? this is the power of map. You have to know this 2 things to learn the map # 1: symbol. # 2: scale. Symbol is make real things or places in to more simple. Scale is make a big place in to more small place to draw a map. There are many kind of map. There are Population distributed map, tour map, weather map. This maps are all use for something. Tour map is for tour. Weather map is for Weather forecast. Weather satellite take a picture. And it has cloud or something like that. End~ image view 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-08-31 답변내용 Students who like social study will know map. >>Students who like social studies know what a map is. (intended message) Map is very helful. >>A map is very helpful. (lack of article / spelling) It is because it help you to find a way to go. >>It is because it helps you to find a way to go. (subject-verb agreement) Like this story.(this is example) >>Like this story.(this is an example) (lack of article) I'm Dao Cahill. >>Good sentence! Then my friend Ji-woo visit my house. >>Then my friend Ji-woo visited my house. (verb tense) That time, My house was exorbitant big. So if Ji-woo want to play at my room, I have to draw a map for him. >> That time, my house was exorbitant big, so if Ji-woo wants to play at my room, I have to draw a map for him. (capitalize the first letter of the sentence only / subject-verb agreement) It was laborious work. Because my house is 100a(this is example). >>What is 100 a? Then Ji-woo expound the map and he found my room. >>Then Ji-woo looked at the map and he found my room. (choice of words) See? this is the power of map. >>See? this is the power of a map. (lack of article) You have to know this 2 things to learn the map # 1: symbol. # 2: scale. >>You have to know these 2 things to learn the map # 1: symbol. # 2: scale. (plural determiner) Symbol is make real things or places in to more simple. >>Symbols make real things or places into simpler forms. (pluralization ) Scale is make a big place in to more small place to draw a map. >>The scale makes a big place into a smaller place when drawing a map. (lack of article) There are many kind of map. >>There are many kinds of maps. (pluralization) There are Population distributed map, tour map, weather map. >>There are population distributed maps, tour maps and weather maps. (pluralization) This maps are all use for something. >>Those maps are all used for something. (determiner) Tour map is for tour. >>The tour map is for touring. (lack of article) Weather map is for Weather forecast. >>The weather map is for the weather forecast. (lack of article) Weather satellite take a picture. And it has cloud or something like that. End~ >>The weather satellite takes a picture of clouds something like that. (lack of article) Thanks for writing! I really appreciate your effort!