1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-08-29 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 2016 Olympic 내 용 You know that 2012 London Olympic end. I think it was very impressive to me. Like Yank Hak-sun, Ki Bo-bae, Jin Jong-oh, and other athlete of Korea done it well. And also everyone will know that in 2016, the Olympic will be held in Rio de Janeiro. It is in Brazil. It is the most big city in Brazil. I think it is bad to it will be held in brazil. Like the London Olympic, I have to wake up early in the moring. Like 2 'o clock. It is because that Brazil's time and Korean's discrepancy is 12 hours. So If AM race, I can watch. But If it is PM race I can't watch. The good thing is that Brazil do two things, One is this Rio de Janeiro Olympics and the other is World cup(football). In 2014. So I can adaptation on Brazil's time when they do World Cup. And in 2016, I will use that time thingy. I even want to go to Rio de Janeiro. Also I want to go to Brazil to because I want to watch Carnival, Amazone and Amazone river. And of course the Olympics. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-08-30 답변내용 You know that 2012 London Olympic end. >>You know that the 2012 London Olympics ended. (lack of article / verb tense) I think it was very impressive to me. >>Good sentence! Like Yank Hak-sun, Ki Bo-bae, Jin Jong-oh, and other athlete of Korea done it well. >>Yank Hak-sun, Ki Bo-bae, Jin Jong-oh and other athletes of Korea did well. (unnecessary word / pluralization) And also everyone will know that in 2016, the Olympic will be held in Rio de Janeiro. >>Everyone also knows that in 2016, the olympics will be held in Rio de Janeiro. (intended message) It is in Brazil. >>Good sentence! It is the most big city in Brazil. >>It is the bigesst city in Brazil. (superlative) I think it is bad to it will be held in brazil. >>I think it is bad that it will be held in Brazil. (choice of word / capitalization) Like the London Olympic, I have to wake up early in the moring. Like 2 'o clock. >>Like the London Olympics, I have to wake up early in the moring like 2 'o clock. It is because that Brazil's time and Korean's discrepancy is 12 hours. So If AM race, I can watch. But If it is PM race I can't watch. >>What do you mean by PM race? The good thing is that Brazil do two things, One is this Rio de Janeiro Olympics and the other is World cup(football).In 2014 >>The good thing is that Brazil will host two events, one is the olympics and the other is world cup in 2014. (intended message) So I can adaptation on Brazil's time when they do World Cup. >>I can adapt to Brazil's time when they do the world cup. (choice of word) And in 2016, I will use that time thingy. >>In 2016, I will use that time thingy. (unnecessary word) I even want to go to Rio de Janeiro. >>Good sentence! Also I want to go to Brazil to because I want to watch Carnival, Amazone and Amazone river. And of course the Olympics. >>I want to go to Brazil to because I want to watch a Carnival, Amazon and see the Amazon river and of course the Olympics. (spelling) Thanks for writing. Keep up the good work!