1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-08-28 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Yes! I'm safe... but no.. 내 용 According yester day's diary, typhoon BOLAVEN was coming up. And 08/28 Bolaven will struck to Seoul. But I'm safe now in home. Now I will tell you about my story. Due to the typhoon, I haven't been to school. So I help my mom to taping on window(not computer sotfware). Or tape the wet newspaper to the window. That was good. Because this things are always handed to dad. So I want to do this work sometimes. First, In window #1. we(me and my mom, brother) tape on the window. The first mission was compleate. Second, my dad have been taken all newspaper. On window #2 we tape about more than 10 newspapers. It was to strange. But our windows are all safe from the roring wind. Ah, but bad News are coming. The # 14 typhoon TEMBIN is coming. In 08/30, It will enter Jeju. And in maybe semtember, the typhoon will be on Seoul. This is like "Awww maaaannn" thing. I think my house will be okay with window of tapes and newspapers. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-08-29 답변내용 According yester day's diary, typhoon BOLAVEN was coming up. >>According to my diary yesterday, typhoon Bolaven was coming. (word order) And 08/28 Bolaven will struck to Seoul. But I'm safe now in home. >>On August 28 Bolaven will strike Seoul, but I'm safe now at home. (verb form / choice of preposition) Now I will tell you about my story. >>Good sentence! Due to the typhoon, I haven't been to school. So I help my mom to taping on window(not computer sotfware). Or tape the wet newspaper to the window. >>Due to the typhoon, I didn't go to school, so I helped my mom in taping the window with wet newspaper. (sentence construction / verb tense) That was good. Because this things are always handed to dad. So I want to do this work sometimes. >> That was good because those things are always handed to dad, so I want to do this work sometimes. (sentence construction) First, In window #1. we(me and my mom, brother) tape on the window. >>First. we taped window number 1. (sentence construction) The first mission was compleate. >>The first mission was complete. (spelling) Second, my dad have been taken all newspaper. >>Second, my dad took all the newspaper. (verb tense) On window #2 we tape about more than 10 newspapers. >>On window #2 we taped about more than 10 newspapers. (verb tense) It was to strange. But our windows are all safe from the roring wind. >>It was too strange, but our windows are all safe from the roaring wind. (spelling) Ah, but bad News are coming. >>There is a bad news. (sentence construction) The # 14 typhoon TEMBIN is coming. >>Typhoon Tembin is coming. (unnecessary words) In 08/30, It will enter Jeju. >>On August 30, it will enter Jeju. (choice of preposition) And in maybe semtember, the typhoon will be on Seoul. >>Maybe, in September it will be in Seoul. (choice of preposition) This is like "Awww maaaannn" thing. >>What do you mean? I think my house will be okay with window of tapes and newspapers. >>Good sentence! Keep safe! Thanks for writing!