1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-08-27 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Typhoon BOLAVEN 내 용 Do you know typhoon BOLAVEN? It will be the most powerful typhoon in Korea. Typhoon cicada(Ma-mee), Lusa, Sahra was most powerful typhoon in korea. "This BOLAVEN will be very strong" said the weather forcest. Now I will tell you aboout Typhoon of Korea. First, Ma-mee. Ten years ago, in 2002 Ma-mee was the central pressure was 965hPa. And most powerful wind was 60 meters per second(60m/s) Typhoon Lusa was also in 2002. Because of Lusa, in Ganloong, rain have been pour 871mm in day. Most powerful wind was 33m/s. In this typhoon, two hundread people died. In 1959 typhoon Sahra was made eight hundreads people died and two thousand five hundreads person been hurts. But this BOLAVEN will be more powerful than Ma-mee and Lusa. The good thing is the typhoon BOLAVEN help me to do not go to school or Academy. And Academy was in vacation in monday. But I wish dad will be okay. image view 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-08-28 답변내용 Do you know typhoon BOLAVEN? >>Good sentence! It will be the most powerful typhoon in Korea. >>Good sentence! Typhoon cicada(Ma-mee), Lusa, Sahra was most powerful typhoon in korea. >>Typhoon cicada(Ma-mee), Lusa and Sahra were the most powerful typhoons in korea. (pluralization) "This BOLAVEN will be very strong" said the weather forcest. >>"This BOLAVEN will be very strong" said the weather forecaster. (spelling) Now I will tell you aboout Typhoon of Korea. >>Now I will tell you aboout the Typhoons of Korea. (plural form) First, Ma-mee. >>Good sentence! Ten years ago, in 2002 Ma-mee was the central pressure was 965hPa. >>Ten years ago, in 2002 Ma-mee had a central pressure of 965hPa. (verb usage) And most powerful wind was 60 meters per second(60m/s). >>The most powerful wind was 60 meters per second. (lack of article) Typhoon Lusa was also in 2002. >>Good sentence! Because of Lusa, in Ganloong, rain have been pour 871mm in day. >>In Ganloong, the amount of rainpour was 871 in one day. (sentence construction) Most powerful wind was 33m/s. >>The most powerful wind was 33m/s. (Lack of article) In this typhoon, two hundread people died. >>Due to this typhoon, two hundred people died. (choice of word) In 1959 typhoon Sahra was made eight hundreads people died and two thousand five hundreads person been hurts. But this BOLAVEN will be more powerful than Ma-mee and Lusa. >>In 1959 typhoon Sahra killed eight hundred people and two thousand five hundread people were hurt but this BOLAVEN will be more powerful than Ma-mee and Lusa. (sentence construction) The good thing is the typhoon BOLAVEN help me to do not go to school or Academy. >>The good thing is that because of typhoon BOLAVEN I don't have to go to school and academy. (intended message) And Academy was in vacation in monday. >>The academy was on vacation on Monday. (choice of article / capitalization) But I wish dad will be okay. >>I wish dad will be okay. (unnecessary word) Thanks for writing! Take care all the time! ^_^