1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-08-24 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 At school 내 용 Today I went to school. Actually you know. I have to go to school every day. But I think today is different because in school, me and my friends are played 2012 childrenlympic. Today we played wrestling, Judo, Hammer throw.It was fun in wresling and Judo. I play with Hyun-woo. It was easy. I throw him. And I K.O. him. Second round, I played with Sin-yang. He was taller and stronger. At first I was loseing. But I turn up side down and win. It was little hard but I think I did great. Third round, I played with Hyun-su. He was not strong so I throw him. If it was truth, I will be fight with Ji-woo. The champion ship. He use back up plan. The story is like this. I want to throw him. But he turns over. He want to trip over. But I grab him. Then Hyun-su lay down. I was confused for while than he get up and dash to me. He down me. He had to do for 3 second. But In 2 second I turn him up side down so I win. The last round was Ji-woo. But I lost. That because he is good at Judo or Wrestle more then me. I didn't join in hammer throw. But in this game Ji-woo did great. Hyun-su was 2nd. The space of Ji-woo and Hyun-su was just few centemeter. I am wating for tommorrow 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-08-27 답변내용 Today I went to school. >>Good sentence! Actually you know. I have to go to school every day. But I think today is different because in school, me and my friends are played 2012 childrenlympic. T >>Actually, you know I have to go to school every day but I think today is different because in school, me and my friends played 2012 childrenlympic. (sentence construction / unnecessary verb:are) Today we played wrestling, Judo, Hammer throw. >>Today we played wrestling, judo and hammer throw. (lack of conjunction) It was fun in wresling and Judo. >>It was fun in wrestling and Judo. (spelling) I play with Hyun-woo. >>I played with Hyun-woo. (verb tense) It was easy. >>Good sentence! I throw him. And I K.O. him. >>I threw him and I knocked him out. (verb tense) Second round, I played with Sin-yang. >>In the second round, I played with Sin-yang. (lack of preposition and article) He was taller and stronger. >>Good sentence! At first I was loseing. But I turn up side down and win. >>At first I was losing but I turned up side down and won. (spelling / verb tense) It was little hard but I think I did great. >>It was a little hard but I think I did great. (lack of article) Third round, I played with Hyun-su. >>In the third round, I played with Hyun-su. (lack of preposition and article) He was not strong so I throw him. >>He was not strong so I threw him. (verb tense) If it was truth, I will be fight with Ji-woo. The champion ship. >>It it was true, I will be fighting with Ji-woo in the championship. (word form) He use back up plan. >>He used a back-up plan. (verb tense / lack of article) The story is like this. >>The story was like this. (verb tense) I want to throw him. But he turns over. >>I wanted to throw him he turned over. (verb tense) He want to trip over. But I grab him. >>He wanted to trip over but I grabbed him. (verb tense) Then Hyun-su lay down. >>Good sentence! I was confused for while than he get up and dash to me. >>I was confused for a while then he got up and dashed to me. (lack of article / verb tense) He down me. >>He put me down. (Intended message) He had to do for 3 second. But In 2 second I turn him up side down so I win. >>He had to do it for 3 seconds but in 2 seconds I turned him up side down so I won. (pluralization / verb tense) The last round was Ji-woo. But I lost. That because he is good at Judo or Wrestle more then me. >>The last round was Ji-woo but I lost because he was better than me in judo and wrestling. (sentence construction) I didn't join in hammer throw. But in this game Ji-woo did great. >>I didn't join in the hammer throw but in this game Ji-woo did great. (lack of article) Hyun-su was 2nd. >>Good sentence! The space of Ji-woo and Hyun-su was just few centemeter. >>What space? I am wating for tommorrow >>I am waiting for tomorrow. (spelling) Thanks for writing! Congratulations for doing well in sports.