1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-08-22 Weather    Feeling  Angry 제 목 Bad day 내 용 Today is will be the super bad day in my life. It started on the morning that when I going to school. My apartment's elevator broken. What? You want to say use to stair? That will make me more angry and grumpy. Because I live in apartment. In apartment, there are lots of stratums in my house. My apartment is 30 stratums high. Actually it is 27 stratums high. But my apartment has 3 stratums of basement. Do you want to know what stratums I belong to? Do you really want to know? Don't surprise. I live in 27 stratums. And elevator mechanics are doing not thing. When I come back from school, the elevators aren't fixed. Mom was mad. She said to mechanics "What are you doing? If the other mechanics said he is going to get components. But he did not come. Then you have to go and take it. I'm going to demand you guys" And me and mom come back home. I think mom will be very tired. Because, she didn't do any exercises. And she have to going and returning 3 times on today. She had been up and down 162 stratums. It is about 200 stratums luckly, I going and returning just 1. That mean I have been move 54 stratums. I hope tommorrow's elevator will be good. 답변자 tc0013 답변일 2012-08-24 답변내용 Today is will be the super bad day in my life. >> Today was the super bad day of my life. (sentence constrcution) It started on the morning that when I going to school. >> It started on the morning, when I was on my way to our school. (sentence construction) My apartment's elevator broken. >> My apartment's elevator was broken. (lack of helpling verb) What? You want to say use to stair? >> What!? Do you want to say that I need to use the stairs!? (sentence construction) That will make me more angry and grumpy. (correct) Because I live in apartment. >> Because I live in an apartment. (lack of determiner) In apartment, there are lots of stratums in my house. >> In our apartment, there are lots of stratums in my house. (lack of pronoun) My apartment is 30 stratums high. >> My apartment has 30 stratum high. (word choice - verb / spelling) Actually it is 27 stratums high. >> Actually, it is 27 stratums high. (lack of puntuation mark - comma) But my apartment has 3 stratums of basement. >> But my apartment has 3 stratums basement. (null preposition) Do you want to know what stratums I belong to? (correct) Do you really want to know? (correct) Don't surprise. >> Don't be surprise. (lack of be-verb) I live in 27 stratums. (correct) And elevator mechanics are doing not thing. >> And elevator mechanics are not doing a thing. (syntax / lack of determiner) When I come back from school, the elevators aren't fixed. >> When I came back from school, the elevators still aren't fixed. (past form of verb / lack of adverb) Mom was mad. (correct) She said to mechanics "What are you doing? (correct) If the other mechanics said he is going to get components. >> The other mechanics said he is going to get components. (null conjunction) But he did not come. (correct) Then you have to go and take it. (correct) I'm going to demand you guys" And me and mom come back home. >> I'm going to sue you guys" And my mom and I went inside our home. (sentence constrcution) I think mom will be very tired. >> I think my mom will be very tired. (lack of pronoun) Because, she didn't do any exercises. (correct) And she have to going and returning 3 times on today. >> She went three times up down 3 times today, through the stairs. (sentence constrcution) She had been up and down 162 stratums. (correct) It is about 200 stratums luckly, I going and returning just 1. >> It is about 200 stratums luckliy, I go up and down just once. (sentence construction) That mean I have been move 54 stratums. >> That means I have to walk through 54 stratums. (sentence construction) I hope tommorrow's elevator will be good. >> I hope that tommorrow, the elevator will be fixed. (sentence construction) @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ All of us here on this earth have some bad days. That is terrible! You have to walk up and down 27 floors? It must have been very tiring. Anyway, I hope it already fixed.