1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-08-20 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 First day at school 내 용 Today, the Summer vacation ended. Most students like vacation and hate to go to school. But I'm not. It is because in school, I can play game many time. The game in this diary is not a video game or computer game. It is kind of board game. Just like Me and my friends made this game before. But we are still playing this game. It is called <The War> The real name was <Terretory War>. But <The War> is more upgrade version. The game rule is almost same as the starcraft of world of warcraft. Me and Ji-woo make characters and Sin-yang and Hyun-su make weapons. And I do all of composition. Like factory, fortress or board. We produce robots and tanks to fight. Also when we kill other's we can make money. Other game is <adventure skill>. It is the game that I'm thinking of. I want to go to school. 답변자 tc0013 답변일 2012-08-22 답변내용 Today, the Summer vacation ended. >> Today, the summer vacation has ended. (small case letter / lack of helping verb) Most students like vacation and hate to go to school. (correct) But I'm not. >> But I do not. (word choice - verb) It is because in school, I can play game many time. >> It is because in school, I can play game many times. (pluralization) The game in this diary is not a video game or computer game. (correct) It is kind of board game. (correct) Just like Me and my friends made this game before. >> Just like me and my friends made this game before. (correct) But we are still playing this game. (correct) It is called <The War> The real name was <Terretory War>. (correct) But <The War> is more upgrade version. >> But <The War> is more upgraded version. (past form of verb) The game rule is almost same as the starcraft of world of warcraft. (correct) Me and Ji-woo make characters and Sin-yang and Hyun-su make weapons. (correct) And I do all of composition. >> All I do is to compose. (sentence construction) Like factory, fortress or board. (correct) We produce robots and tanks to fight. >> We produced robots and tanks to fight. (past form of verb) Also when we kill other's we can make money. (correct) Other game is <adventure skill>. (correct) It is the game that I'm thinking of. (correct) I want to go to school. (correct) @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ That is the spirit. I hope that all would have the same attitude like you.