1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-08-17 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 39clues(2) 내 용 Yester day, I write about 39clues. It is very interesting. Today, in computer academy, I vist the site called 'www.39clues.com' It is website so perfect. It is English. And I can read the book. I read Cahill vs Vesper. It is all started by Gideon Cahill. Cahill's ancestor. And Damien Vesper. The ancestor of Vesper. In 1507 Gideon Cahill mading the liquid medicine for all his sons and dauthers. Damien Vesper is friend of Gideon Cahill. Damien help Gideon to make liquid medicne. Gideon and Damien promise to have a half bottle each. But one day, Gideon ran away to some place and hide the liquid. But bottle cracked. And a ring come out from the liquid. The Vespers are very angry with Gideon Cahill. Damien Vesper started to find Gideon's ring. Year pass, and Gideon and Damien die. Gideon gave his ring to Katherine Cahill. And it pass on and on. The last person who protect the Gideon's ring is Grace Cahill. Dan and Amy's grandmother. The next protector must be Hoff Cahill. Both Dan and Amy's mother and Grace's dauther. But Isable Kabra kill her with Arthur Trand. So Amy and Dan started to protect the ring. Also I join in the www.39clues.com. I have to check some question to make a five branches of Cahill. But Madrigals are out. So there are four branches. Lucian, Tomas, Ekaterina, Janus. Lucian is good at tricks and cheat. In Tomas, many people are athlete. Ekat? they are smart. Janus is good at art, sing, and write. Do you want to know what branches? First try, it was Ekat. Second is Tomas, and third is Ekat again. So I have to be in Ekat. And also we can talk friends on online. Who only join in 39clues website. Also I can talk to my friends in ALL OVER THE WORLD!! This is good thing to prove my English skills. In chatroom, my talking user name is 'Dao Cahill' It is just like a memeber in Cahill-Ekat. I want to visit hear again 답변자 tc0013 답변일 2012-08-21 답변내용 Yester day, I write about 39clues. >> Yesterday, I wrote about 39clues. (past form of verb / proper spacing) It is very interesting. (correct) Today, in computer academy, I vist the site called 'www.39clues.com' It is website so perfect. >> Today, in the computer academy, I visited the site called 'www.39clues.com'. It is a perfect website. (sentence construction) It is English. And I can read the book. >> It is written in English, so I can read the book. (past form of verb) I read Cahill vs Vesper. (correct) It is all started by Gideon Cahill. (correct) Cahill's ancestor. And Damien Vesper. The ancestor of Vesper. >> Cahill's ancestor, and Damien Vesper are the ancestor of Vesper. (sentence construction) In 1507 Gideon Cahill mading the liquid medicine for all his sons and dauthers. >> In 1507, Gideon Cahill made a liquid medicine for all his sons and dauthers. (sentence construction) Damien Vesper is friend of Gideon Cahill. (correct) Damien help Gideon to make liquid medicne. >> Damien helped Gideon to make liquid medicine. (past form of verb / spelling) Gideon and Damien promise to have a half bottle each. >> Gideon and Damien promised to have a half of a battle each. (sentence construction) But one day, Gideon ran away to some place and hide the liquid. (correct) But bottle cracked. And a ring come out from the liquid. >> But the bottle cracked, and a ring came out from the liquid. (sentence construction) The Vespers are very angry with Gideon Cahill. >> The Vespers were very angry at Gideon Cahill. (past form of verb / word choice - preposition) Damien Vesper started to find Gideon's ring. (correct) Year pass, and Gideon and Damien die. >> Years passed, and Gideon and Damien die. (S-V agreement) Gideon gave his ring to Katherine Cahill. (correct) And it pass on and on. >> And it was passed on and on. (past form of verb) The last person who protect the Gideon's ring is Grace Cahill. >> The last person who protected the Gideon's ring was Grace Cahill. (past form of verb) Dan and Amy's grandmother. (correct) The next protector must be Hoff Cahill. (correct) Both Dan and Amy's mother and Grace's dauther. (correct) But Isable Kabra kill her with Arthur Trand. So Amy and Dan started to protect the ring. >> But Isable Kabra killed her with Arthur Trand, so Amy and Dan started to protect the ring. (sentence construction) Also I join in the www.39clues.com. >> Also, I joined in the www.39clues.com. (need of punctuation mark / past of verb) I have to check some question to make a five branches of Cahill. >> I had to check some questions to make a five branches of Cahill. (past form of verb / pluralization) But Madrigals are out. (correct) So there are four branches. Lucian, Tomas, Ekaterina, Janus. >> So there are four branches left, they were Lucian, Tomas, Ekaterina, and Janus. (sentence construction) Lucian is good at tricks and cheat. >> Lucian is good at tricking and cheating. (parallelism) In Tomas, many people are athlete. >> At the Tomases, many people are athletes. (sentence construction) Ekat? they are smart. >> The Ekats, they are smart. (lack of determiner / pluralization) Janus is good at art, sing, and write. >> Janus is good at art, sing, and writing. (parallelism) Do you want to know what branches? >> Do you want to know what branches I like? (fragments) First try, it was Ekat. Second is Tomas, and third is Ekat again. >> First try, it was Ekat, second was Tomas, and third was Ekat again. (sentence construction) So I have to be in Ekat. (correct) And also we can talk friends on online. >> And also we can talk to our friends on online. (lack of prepositional phrase) Who only join in 39clues website. >> Who can only log-in at 39clues website? (sentence construction) Also I can talk to my friends in ALL OVER THE WORLD!! >> Also I can talk to my friends from ALL OVER THE WORLD!! (word choice - preposition) This is good thing to prove my English skills. (correct) In chatroom, my talking user name is 'Dao Cahill'. (correct) It is just like a memeber in Cahill-Ekat. >> It is just like a member in Cahill-Ekat. (spellling) I want to visit hear again >> I want to visit the website again. (sentence constrcution) @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ This is a good practice of your English skill. Keep it up.