1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-08-16 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 39clues 내 용 I have something to tell you. I'm reading book called 'The 39clues' It is very interesting book. You know that? In this book, Amy and Dan Cahill is the characters. There mom hoff Cahill and Arthur trand is kill by Vickram Kabra and his wife, Isable Kabra. Amy and Dan Cahill and other cousin start to find the 39 clues. The team 1 is Isable Kabra's son and dauther. Ian and Natalie Kabra. team 2 is the Holts. The family of Esenhower Holts, his wife Marry todd, her children Hamilton, Regan, and Madison. team 3 is Alistair Oh. Amy and Dan's uncle. team 4 is Ned, Ted, and Sneid starlings. team 5 is Irina N. Spasky. team 6 is Jonah Wizard. lastly, team 7 is our Amy and Dan. Cahill has five branches. Kabras and Irina is 'Lucian' and Holts are 'Tomas'. Jonah Wizard is 'Janus' and Ned, Ted, Sneid and Alistair is 'Ekaterina' and Amy, Dan and their au pair Nellie is 'Madrigals' Lucian's mark is a sword with two snake. Tomas's mark is bear. Janus's mark is wolf. Ekat's mark is dragon. Madrigals? It is Just letter M. All branches are good at something. Lucian:cheating Tomas:physical strength Janus:Writing, Arts, singing Ekaterina:smart brain Madrigals:nothing But Madrigals want to gather family in one. Because In many years, The family always fight and cracked. Cahill's ancestor is Gideon Cahill, in 1507. In book 10 all clue hunts are end. In book 11 Cahill is start to fight with vesper. The other one's family who really jealous at Cahill. Ah, I'm wating for book 12. -THE END- image view 답변자 tc0013 답변일 2012-08-21 답변내용 I have something to tell you. (correct) I'm reading book called 'The 39clues'. (correct) It is very interesting book. (correct) You know that? (correct) In this book, Amy and Dan Cahill is the characters. >> In this book, Amy and Dan Cahill are the characters. (subject-verb agreement) There mom hoff Cahill and Arthur trand is kill by Vickram Kabra and his wife, Isable Kabra. Amy and Dan Cahill and other cousin start to find the 39 clues. >> There is mom hoff Cahill and Arthur trand was killed by Vickram Kabra and his wife, Isable Kabra. Amy and Dan Cahill and other cousin started to find the 39 clues. (sentence construction) The team 1 is Isable Kabra's son and dauther. >> The team 1 are Isable Kabra's son and dauther. (S-V agreement) Ian and Natalie Kabra. team 2 is the Holts. >> Ian and Natalie Kabra. team 2 are the Holts. (S-V agreement) The family of Esenhower Holts, his wife Marry todd, her children Hamilton, Regan, and Madison. Team 3 is Alistair Oh. (correct) Amy and Dan's uncle. team 4 is Ned, Ted, and Sneid starlings. team 5 is Irina N. Spasky. team 6 is Jonah Wizard. lastly, team 7 is our Amy and Dan. >> Amy and Dan's uncle. team 4 are Ned, Ted, and Sneid starlings. Team 5 are Irina N. Spasky. Team 6 are Jonah Wizard. lastly, team 7 are our Amy and Dan. (S-V agreement / capitalization) Cahill has five branches. (Correct) Kabras and Irina are 'Lucians' and Holts are 'Tomas'. Jonah Wizard are 'Janus' and Ned, Ted, Sneid and Alistair are 'Ekaterina' and Amy, Dan and their au pair Nellie are 'Madrigals' Lucian's mark are a sword with two snake. (S-V agreement) Tomas's mark is bear. (correct) Janus's mark is wolf. (correct) Ekat's mark is dragon. Madrigals? (correct) It is Just letter M. All branches are good at something. (correct) Lucian:cheating Tomas:physical strength Janus:Writing, Arts, singing Ekaterina:smart brain Madrigals:nothing But Madrigals want to gather family in one. (correct) Because In many years, The family always fight and cracked. >> Because in many years, the family always fight and cracked. (capitalization) Cahill's ancestor is Gideon Cahill, in 1507. (correct) In book 10 all clue hunts are end. >> In book 10, all clue hunts were ended. (sentence construction) In book 11 Cahill is start to fight with vesper. >> In book 11, Cahill started to fight with the vesper. (sentence construction) The other one's family who really jealous at Cahill. (correct) Ah, I'm wating for book 12. (correct) -THE END- @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ Thhis is a fascinating story. I wish I could read it, too. Goodluck. Please take note of the corrections I made tonight.