1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-08-15 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Tired day 내 용 I think today is the most tired day in my life. It is because I come back from gifted children camp. So I am very tired. Me and my friends go to west sea youth hostel. This youth hostel is not YOUTH hostel. It is ARMY hostel. It is very tired to do thing in hear. Teachers are all scary. Every one said so. Exept me and my friend, 6 grade brothers. If teacher block the hallway to go to store, we slip out. This is tired thing. And we sleep at 11:00. I think I have to sleep that time. But I did not sleep. I just wake up all night. And In 3:00 in the morning, I sleeped. But actually I have to get up at 7:10 in the morning. But I woke up at 5:24 in the morning. This is very tired thing. I only sleeped 2 hours and 24 miniutes. I think it is better than wake up all night. If I was wake up all night, I won't be writing this diary. Haaammmm~~. I am very tired now so good night. 답변자 tc0013 답변일 2012-08-21 답변내용 I think today is the most tired day in my life. >> I think today is the most tiring day in my life. (form of verb) It is because I come back from gifted children camp. >> It is because I just came back from gifted children camp. (form of verb / lack of adverb) So I am very tired. (correct) Me and my friends go to west sea youth hostel. >> My friends and I went to west sea youth hostel. (sentence construction) This youth hostel is not YOUTH hostel. (correct) It is ARMY hostel. >> It is an ARMY hostel. (lack of determiner) It is very tired to do thing in hear. >> It is very tiring to do things here. (sentence construction) Teachers are all scary. (correct) Every one said so. (correct) Exept me and my friend, 6 grade brothers. >> Exept me and my friend, and my 6 grade brothers. (parallelism / lack of conjunction) If teacher block the hallway to go to store, we slip out. >> If the teacher blocked the hallway to go to store, we slip out. (lack of determiner / past form of verb) This is tired thing. >> This is a tiring thing. (lack of determiner / form of verb) And we sleep at 11:00. >> And we slept at 11:00. (past form of a verb) I think I have to sleep that time. >> I think I had to sleep that time. (past form of a verb) But I did not sleep. (correct) I just wake up all night. >> I just stayed awake all night. (sentence construction) And In 3:00 in the morning, I sleeped. >> And at 3:00 in the morning, I fell asleep. (sentence construction) But actually I have to get up at 7:10 in the morning. >> But actually I had to get up at 7:10 in the morning. (past of form of verb) But I woke up at 5:24 in the morning. (correct) This is very tired thing. >> This is very tiring thing. (form of verb) I only sleeped 2 hours and 24 miniutes. >> I only slept for 2 hours and 24 minutes. (sentence construction) I think it is better than wake up all night. >> I think it is better than waking up all night. (form of verb) If I was wake up all night, I won't be writing this diary. >> If I was awake up all night, I won't be writing this diary. (form of verb) Haaammmm~~. I am very tired now so good night. (correct) @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ It must be the longest night ever, hah. Things happens. Those are some of the uncontrolled variables in life. Try get some sleep the next day, so you can recuperate.